In class, we did a Pitch presentation, giving brief ideas about what our coursework is going to involve.
Attached I have added a photo of the written comments I received from my pitch presentation
From my feedback, I have figured that some of the things that are going well is the feature of 'everyone's clicking on', which I plan to include in the design of my website. However, some of this feedback also says that I need to work more on the specific ideas for my 2 magazine covers, and making sure that both of my ideas link to the brief of health, which I will continue to think about when planning the design of my website. Also something else I need to consider are specific examples of intertextuality, and so I will begin to incorporate this into the following planning stages of my website.
There were also a few comments about how people liked the ideas for the overall colour scheme of the website, and magazine covers. Therefore, this is something I plan to continue developing as I begin the creation of my front covers.
